Disrup - Charcoholic Concept

This is one of my fav.......cuz itz the 1st time im doing graff wif charcoal ....the words are just made up.....just kinda pops up in my brainz....and yes i was mod from a graff mag "Dizrupt"...i found out that it was from it after getting it done.......it looks kinda dirty tho....but i want it to look dat way......to make it feel like my theme - Charcoholic Concept .........but heck i still want commentz or critiquez so that i can improve